Shredlock's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm gonna smack your big stupid face, with my HEAD]

e;h;j

Edit:
Well, since you uploaded something so surreal, I tried to upload a surreal comment on it.

[little 8bit i made]

Never use riff maker. It creates very incoherent riffs. Also needs hihats. Other than that, nice.

[Riddim]

The intro is actually quite quite nice. When the snare comes in, it sounds high end, change it to a clap. The build just stops the music and has a riser and a bass. Keep the music, add more pads.

The drop wouldn't be half bad if you added a sub bass (a really low sine wave thats pretty loud) and made the snare a kick and clap at the same time instead of a snare.

Scouted.

GaLaX7-Official responds:

thanks for help im still learning

[TheFatRat - Warrior Song (Dota 2 Music Pack)]

hey, i know you won't ever read this, but on the off chance, how did you make the massive horn in the beginning?

[Paper Plane]

Some high end would help, I get that you like bASS, but seriously. The beat itself needs more hi-hats that are not low-passed, and a little more punchy.

[happy?]

nope

[Automaton]

The intro is odd, I kinda like it. During the drop however, there are two main problems:
1: the drums aren't intense. Look up how to sidechain in your DAW, and then boost the volume.
2: The "wobble bass" isn't a bass, basses should be low in pitch.

[Dopest Dope Unfiniehsed]

really nice, i think the intro could use a riser.

[Toyland]

The intro seems a bit off, is it a drill sound?
In all the cool arps n stuff, there are some parts where it goes a bit out of key, and at 00:49. there are some weird hisses of white noise, and they happen again.

Other then that, no complaints. I like the off pauses, and the choir.

[7/11]

So, i get you're going for some trippy-shit style music. IMO, every song ever needs either:
A solid beat to follow OR
a nice melody that is catchy

Since this is some weird trippy stuff, it doesn't have either thing, and i think it could use some element to make it a little but more recognizable.
That said, this is well-produced. Nice job.