Riddim The intro is actually quite quite nice. When the snare comes in, it sounds high end, change it to a clap. The build just stops the music and has a riser and a bass. Keep the music, add more pads.
The drop wouldn't be half bad if you added a sub bass (a really low sine wave thats pretty loud) and made the snare a kick and clap at the same time instead of a snare.
Scouted.